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she's pressed to a pillar on the other side of a silver painted tree, his face thrown in light and shadow from the string of led christmas lights strung therein. she's sure that she should be at least a little upset with her position, close enough to him to feel his heat dispel the lasting chill of the outdoors. there are people out there who would be scandalized by the way his arm is proprietorially caging her in and how she's enjoying every second of being pressed against the wall by him.

if she were any kind of brave, she'd rest a hand on his side, just to hold him that much tighter to herself.

as it is, she's hardly even looking at his face, though she can see his lips curving into a smug smile from where she's staring at that notch in his collarbone that's been teasing her from his open collar all night. she doesn't stop herself from reaching up to rub a fingertip in the hollow of his throat, unsurprised to see him flush and stand back a moment. there's going from a handshake to a hug in the course of a night, but any more would be something altogether different.

he holds out a single white rosebud, stem cut short like it had been his boutonniere before he'd shrugged out of his jacket to get down to work. she doesn't take it straight away, running her fingertips along the tip of an opening petal.

"i'm not very brave, chad," she says softly, a non-sequitur if anything.

"it doesn't have to mean any more than it does, sophie." he turns her palm up and places the flower gently in her hand. "you looked pretty tonight."

when he steps away, she's colder than she's been since the beginning of the night.

Date: 2010-01-01 07:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] joeymichaels.livejournal.com
This was a charming set of entries. It works as a series of stories and I think you did a great job of making the prompts little references in the stories instead of the thing that the section was about. Hurray!

Date: 2010-01-05 01:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shadows-of.livejournal.com
thanks! i had fun writing it. i just wish i was still competing on LJ Idol. things just didn't pan out that way....

Date: 2010-01-02 10:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippedonpaper.livejournal.com
I enjoyed these but, there is a sense of ...what happened? Is there more to the story? How does this couple end up?

Do/did you continue it?

"I'm not very brave" she said. I feel the same way.

I enjoyed this set of entries. Great job using ALL of the prompts!

Date: 2010-01-05 01:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shadows-of.livejournal.com
i... actually don't have any more to this particular storyline. it was retconned into a novella i wrote called "life @ 23"... you can find it here on my website as a .pdf. i've been adding apocrypha to that story for some time, so YMMV in regards liking that as well, but it's there if you're interested.

thank you very much for reading!! i'm glad you enjoyed it. (depending on how things work out, i may build this as its own set inside life @ 23, as where it fits in the timeline doesn't *really* have much description in the novella)

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